I honestly don't know what to even critique here XD everything is all fine to me...Im not the best critic ;w;
All I know is to say how much I really love this Drawing of Melody
The style is really unique, catches the eye well and is fun to look at. I like her short stocky chibi body and that flat soft looking face~ Love the eyes and the shines in them. So big and pearl like.
I really enjoy the sketch like but still smooth lineart. Did her mane and tail nice spiky and poofy~
I guess I can say the only thing that sticks out to me is the points in her legs but I'm assuming thats your style and It still looks good
Great job on this dear~ And thank you so much